Topic: | Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus | |
Posted by: | Stuart Kerr | |
Date/Time: | 10/07/15 12:13:00 |
Thanks Kevin... Rima dear, well done. For taking the time to write another decent tale for the forum.. However I have to tell you that exactly the same as Janine's, your story simply isn't comedy. It's comedy's beloved bedfellow, tragedy. If you really want to understand comedy, read Claire Moran's post. Now that IS funny and has massive comedy potential. Study the subject matter. Feel the intense anger – visualise the notebook and the complaint procedure... sneak a look at the little doggy wagging its tail - and picture the bewildered bus-driver's face as he's given a hard time.. Then shut your eyes and think Victor Meldew and those brilliant scripts of One Foot in the Grave.. Someone will write this comedy series one day soon.. sure as God made little apples.. ;) |