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Topic: Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus
Posted by: Stuart Kerr
Date/Time: 10/07/15 12:13:00


Thanks Kevin...

Rima dear, well done. For taking the time to write another decent tale for the forum.. However I have to tell you that exactly the same as Janine's, your story simply isn't comedy. It's comedy's beloved bedfellow, tragedy.

If you really want to understand comedy, read Claire Moran's post. Now that IS funny and has massive comedy potential.  Study the subject matter. Feel the intense anger visualise the notebook and the complaint procedure... sneak a look at the little doggy wagging its tail - and picture the bewildered bus-driver's face as he's given a hard time..

Then shut your eyes and think Victor Meldew and those brilliant scripts of One Foot in the Grave..

Someone will write this comedy series one day soon.. sure as God made little apples..

;)


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TopicDate PostedPosted By
Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 08:35:00 Janine Jarvis
   Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 09:05:00 Philippa Bond
   Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 09:06:00 Colin Jordan
      Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 09:12:00 Curzon Tussaud
         Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 10:04:00 John Kennedy
   Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 10:04:00 Stuart Kerr
      Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 11:34:00 Rima Jones
         Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 11:38:00 Claire Moran
            Re:Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 12:26:00 bobby osborne
      Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 11:55:00 Kevin Mitchell
         Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 12:13:00 Stuart Kerr
            Re:Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 12:22:00 Carl Wynne
               Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 13:03:00 Simon Everton
                  Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 13:13:00 Rima Jones
                     Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Comedy of errors: E3 bus10/07/15 14:33:00 Claire Moran
            Comedy title10/07/15 13:11:00 Ken Munn
               Re:Comedy title10/07/15 13:58:00 Stuart Kerr
                  Re:Re:Central casting...10/07/15 21:09:00 Stuart Kerr
                     Re:Re:Re:Central casting...10/07/15 21:28:00 Claire Moran
                        Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...10/07/15 21:33:00 Claire Moran
                        Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...10/07/15 21:38:00 Claire Moran
                           Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...10/07/15 22:07:00 Claire Moran
                              Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...10/07/15 22:09:00 Stuart Kerr
                                 Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...10/07/15 22:19:00 Claire Moran
                                    Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...10/07/15 22:44:00 Rima Jones
                                       Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...10/07/15 22:56:00 Claire Moran
                                          Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...11/07/15 10:05:00 Rima Jones
                                             Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...11/07/15 10:33:00 Rima Jones
                                                Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...11/07/15 10:37:00 Stuart Kerr
                                                   Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...11/07/15 10:55:00 Georgina Flint
                                                      Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...11/07/15 11:00:00 Carl Wynne
                                                         Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...11/07/15 11:02:00 Georgina Flint
                                                            Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...11/07/15 11:51:00 Rima Jones
                                                               Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Central casting...11/07/15 12:27:00 Rima Jones
                                                                  Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 12:46:00 Stuart Kerr
                                                                     Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 14:10:00 Claire Moran
                                                                        Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 15:29:00 Rima Jones
                                                                     Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 15:07:00 Rima Jones
                                                                        Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 15:12:00 Claire Moran
                                                                           Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 15:45:00 Stuart Kerr
                                                                              Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 15:59:00 Carl Wynne
                                                                              Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 16:00:00 Claire Moran
                                                                                 Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 16:31:00 Rima Jones
                                                                                 Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 16:31:00 bobby osborne
                                                                                    Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 16:42:00 Stuart Kerr
                                                                                    Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 17:08:00 Delilah Hall
                                                                                       Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 17:10:00 bobby osborne
                                                                                          Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 17:37:00 Delilah Hall
                                                                                       Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 17:43:00 Keith Iddon
                                                                                          Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 17:48:00 Delilah Hall
                                                                                             Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 17:49:00 Delilah Hall
                                                                                                Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 18:00:00 bobby osborne
                                                                                             Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 18:03:00 Keith Iddon
                                                                                                Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 18:08:00 Keith Iddon
                                                                                                   Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 18:11:00 Delilah Hall
                                                                                                re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 18:08:00 Delilah Hall
                                                                                                   Re:re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 18:25:00 Keith Iddon
                                                                                                      Re:Re:re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 18:41:00 Delilah Hall
                                                                                                         Re:Re:Re:re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 18:46:00 bobby osborne
                                                                                                            Re:Re:Re:Re:re: bus on diversion....11/07/15 18:47:00 Keith Iddon

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